jhesqi

Error #3: For the company page, the description for the following are duplicated. The #10 and #14 are the same, the number #11 and #15 are the same.

10. Imperial Group to Intercontinental Corporation
14. Imperial Group  to Intercontinental Corporation

11. Intercontinental Corporation to Intercontinental Group
15. Intercontinental Corporation to Intercontinental Group

Link: http://bto.dovogame.com:8003/htm ... y/2010/0113_37.html

Could you fix this also? Thank you.

jhesqi

Error #4: For the company page, the #13, #14, #15 descriptions seems to be out of place in the order of "company A" to "company B", "company B" to "company C", and so on.
Upon checking on this. The next company level to #12 seems to be #16, but rewards / requirements / upgrade effect seems to be messed up. Please correct this.

10. Imperial Group to Intercontinental Corporation
11. Intercontinental Corporation to Intercontinental Group
12. Intercontinental Group to Global Corporation

13. Imperial Corporation to Imperial Group
14. Imperial Group  to Intercontinental Corporation
15. Intercontinental Corporation to Intercontinental Group

16. Global Corporation to Global Group
17. Global Group to Universal Corporation

Link: http://bto.dovogame.com:8003/htm ... y/2010/0113_37.html

snaggleflaps

BTO can you confirm for me which guide it is we are checking for errors; As you do have 2 completely different guide areas

Link #1
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/index.php

Link # 2
http://bto.dovogame.com/html/gameguide/


Which jhesqi's post before me. Has made me noticed

dudeduss

Yeah, it's helpful, isn't it
gamebtoen Posted at 7/21/2010 00:46

I'm sure some power mad Mod will remove this post. But really, you guys think the game guide you created is helpful? I guess its ok for somebody that has just started playing but frankly its beyond useless. A person with limited IQ would work out through playing the game what the guide details. It is one of the worse game guides I think I've every read in some 25 years of games playing and if I was project manager then I'd sack the person who did such a poor job. I'm not even such what your trying to achieve with it other than saying the game has a written guide.

snaggleflaps

The picture for downtown and commercial both need to be changed.

http://bto.dovogame.com:8003/htm ... e/2009/1223_20.html

Wednesday

I couldn't see anyone else posting this, but the routine for the secretary can only handle two tasks at a time. Any more added to the queue get lost to cyber space and never completed.

cimar

"It records the major events that have happened since the establishing of the company, such as Social Class upgrade, stores upgrading to perfect level, company upgrade and company daily revenue hitting a new high. "



There are just upgrade of Company and social Class in Milestones

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=427

cimar

Reporting your performance to your investor regularly will increase your credit. When your credit reaches a certain amount, you can apply for more investment fund to the Board of Directors. Your credit will decrease if you haven't reported your performance for a long time.

Maybe the information that you have to do each day a PerfRep !?


http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=435

jhesqi

Under Guild > Guild Bonus, the percentage seems a bit off. i check the current guild bonuses in my server and it is different. Kindly correct this as needed.

Current text:
City Hall Position Bonus
Chairman: Increases guild bonus by 25%.
Senator: Increases guild bonus by 15%.
Floor Leader: Increases guild bonus by 8%.
Legislator: Increases guild bonus by 4%
Deputy: None.

Corrected text:
City Hall Position Bonus
Chairman: Increases guild bonus by 50%.
Senator: Increases guild bonus by 30%.
Floor Leader: Increases guild bonus by 16%.
Legislator: Increases guild bonus by 8%
Deputy: Increases guild bonus by 4%

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=464

jhesqi

BTO can you confirm for me which guide it is we are checking for errors; As you do have 2 completely different guide areas

Link #1
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/index.php

Link # 2
http://bto.dovo ...
snaggleflaps Posted at 7/21/2010 23:31

i think its the BTO guide dude (link #1) that we are suppose to correct. but i posted this anyways since Brad Kidd suggested the company upgrades be included in BTO guide.
just being proactive i guess hehe

jhesqi

here's another one for NPC Landmark, the NPC Landmark link is not located in "Business" but it is located in "City".

Current text:
1. You can enter the landmark system by clicking NPC Landmark on Business column.

Corrected text:
1. You can enter the landmark system by clicking City --> NPC Landmark.

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=544

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=591


It doesn't show Specialty Goods which is worth 150%

jhesqi

Still under NPC Landmark, for the monthly rewards rank 1 to 10 has the same wording problem under Rewards column. I think this should be recruitment agreement. Let me know what you think also

Current text:
Requirement Agreement

Corrected text:
Recruitment Agreement

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=544

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=626

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=582

It doesn't mention that you can complete the Serial quests regarding the Elite battles



Which details on that were in the recent news  in this following link.
http://bto.dovogame.com/newsDetail.php?id=647

jhesqi

This is for Headhunted section. The current description is confusing and needs to be corrected to be more clear.

Also, it would be better if the screenshot actually has a sample employee headhunted to show also the Investigate and Poach button.

Current Text:
Headhunted is equivalent to employees' favorites. Excellent employees will be shown on the Chat once recruitment occurs or when players copy them to actively. These employees can be added to the Headhunt list and be searched for headhunting when needed.

Corrected Text:
Headhunted is similar to making another player's employee be added to your favorites list. Excellent employees will be shown on the Bulletin once recruitment occurs or when players copy them to Chat. These employees can be added to the Headhunt list and be investigated or poached later for headhunting. You can go to the Headhunted list by clicking Character --> Headhunted.

Link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=426

snaggleflaps

I thought it would be cute to mention that when you fire an employee they always have a little something to say about that.

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=518

jhesqi

In the milestones section, not only store upgrades to perfect is included but also upgrades to superlative. I have corrected other wordings as well

Current text:
It records the major events that have happened since the establishing of the company, such as Social Class upgrade, stores upgrading to perfect level, company upgrade and company daily revenue hitting a new high.

Corrected text:
It records the major events that have happened since the establishment of the company, such as Social Class upgrade, stores upgrading to perfect level / superlative level, company upgrade and company daily revenue hitting a new high.

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=427

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=510

It mentions that an employee will lose proficiency points. If further training were to fail. Well we already have an idea of how much they will lose; so why not put that in there?

They will lose 40% of there current proficiency if it fails

jhesqi

For Player Search section, the " Player Search" link is now located above "Login Rewards" link. Currently, the screenshot in the guide is showing that the " Player Search" link is located below "Login Rewards" link. See attached screenshot for the correct location of the link. This needs to be corrected to avoid confusion
link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=428

jhesqi

In the Notifications section under Secretary, the description is incorrect since there are other notifications that can be seen here like for Event, Interaction, Request, and Trade. I have made the corrections below.

Current text:
The outcome of employee training and routines will be notified through Notifications.

Corrected text:
The outcome of employee training, routines, trades in the market, interaction with players, poaching report, employee contract expiration, etc will be notified through Notifications. The notifications can be filtered by Event, Interaction, Request, and Trade or you can view all the notifications in descending order by date / time.

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=433

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=638


Near the bottom where it talks about the combination scrolls it could mention that they cost 149 gold in the shop.

cmstap123

I don't know if this counts as an "error," but when I try to name my stores, it lets me use underscore, but not an apostrophe. Apparently, the system automatically takes an apostrophe as "over twelve  ...
AikaAkari Posted at 7/21/2010 22:08

You have to talk about errors from the game guide.  But I am sure he will still listen to you.

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=660
2 errors on this page.

Error # 1) I noticed at Brad Kidd post that he mentioned that they didn't fit; The lvl 6 Catering Industry stores still don't fit all that much. Which I can mention since according to his screenshot which shows that the article has been edited since then.

Error # 2) I noticed a bold mistake on the stores. It explains itself in the screenshot.
Which the screenshot also shows the alignment of the lvl 6 stores on the page is messed up.

jhesqi

Hmm, here's another thing to correct. For bankruptcy, the application requirements is incomplete and needs to add "lower than large-sized" requirement.

Current text:
Application Requirements: Wealth less than 1000 TCN
                                          Social Class: Populace

Corrected text:
Application Requirements: Wealth less than 1000 TCN
                                          Social Class: Populace
                                          Company Level: Lower than Large-sized Corporation

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=561

snaggleflaps

Improvement: http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=561

It mentions in this article and also on the servers; That social class has to be Populace.

However; My social class is Civilian
When I go to check the bankruptcy it says I achieved Populace class. Which I'm already past Populace class.

So it could improve both by mentioning something similar to like "Higher than Populace Social class"

jhesqi

Under Business > Stores > Store Upgrade Points, the total for level 2 business should be "22 p" and not "21 p". It is 1+1+2+3+4+5+6=22. Kindly correct this.

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=537

snaggleflaps

Hmm, here's another thing to correct.
jhesqi Posted at 7/22/2010 05:34

Lol we both got that one huh.

snaggleflaps

http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=450

Not just factories go in the Industrial zone; Refinery also go there.

jhesqi

In the Business > Employees > Employee Talent, there is no "Medium talent" and this should be corrected to "Intermediate talent"

Current text:
Junior, Medium, Expert and Master
Junior to Medium

Corrected text:
Junior, Intermediate, Expert and Master
Junior to Intermediate

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=517

jhesqi

In the employee talent section, the Advance Enlightenment for "Medium to Expert" (or the corrected "Intermediate to Expert") should be 2,500 Gold and not 2,000 Gold.

Also, could you correct some wrong wordings under Advance Enlightenment:

1. From "Exper" to "Expert"
2. From "180" to "180m"

link:
http://bto.dovogame.com/btoguide/?show=art&id=517